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Guardian Readalong: Vol. 3, Chapters 17 & 18



Hi, and welcome to this week's installment of the Guardian novel readalong! ♡

Here are last week's chapters, and you can find all previous discussions in the schedule posts (part 1, part 2, part 3, part 4, part 5), or via the !readalong tag.

This week's chapters:

  • Chapter 17: Guo Changcheng can't get ahold of the rest of the team, and drives alone to the nearest town. An angry crowd is begging the police to find their loved ones who went missing at Spring Harbor Resort. Guo Changcheng manages the crowd and promises them that the SID is already on the case. Zhao Yunlan's sacrifices some of the true Soul-Guarding Order to save Shen Wei. Shen Wei defeats the Chaos shadow that chased them, but Ghost Face stabs him in the heart with an icicle and takes him away, demanding that Zhao Yunlan brings him the Soul-Guarding Lamp in exchange.


  • Chapter 18: Zhao Yunlan asks the Magistrate to take him to the Reincarnation Cycle in order to awaken Kunlun's spirit. Lin Jing regains the use of his senses and finds himself imprisoned at the Seal, surrounded by youchu. Ghost Face brings Shen Wei there too, and shackles him to the Merit Tree. Shen Wei is in pain, but he mocks Ghost Face and reveals that he's always had the power over the Mountain-River Awl, and that he has tracked Ghost Face and manipulated his actions. Ghost Face attacks him with the icicle again and Shen Wei passes out.


The corresponding chapters in the Chinese version on JJWXC/the fan translation are 98-99.


Excerpts:

1) Xiao Guo manages the crowd

If it were Director Zhao, what would he do? If it were Chu-ge, what would he do?

He couldn’t let these people go to the resort. It was too dangerous. Guo Changcheng suddenly took two steps forward and stood on the curb. “Everyone! Everyone!”

The crowd quieted.

He held his work ID up high. “I’m here from the Special Investigations Department in Dragon City. We specialize in very important, serious cases. Our boss has already rushed to the scene with our very best elite personnel, and he sent me here to explain the situation to you all.

“We haven’t found any signs of your loved ones yet, but we also haven’t had terrible news. We are already doing absolutely everything we can to search for them. Right now, the best thing you can all do to help is to cooperate with the comrades here at the police station while they record all the details. Just absolutely do not go anywhere near the resort. If you do, you’ll make things harder for the rescuers, who’ll have more trouble finding the victims.”

He had never spoken so much in a single breath before. In that instant, Guo Changcheng felt like he wasn’t fighting alone.

His heart felt warm and toasty, as if a flame were burning within him. Cupping his hands together, he bowed to everybody around him.



2) Zhao Yunlan's burns the Soul-Guarding Order

“That’s the power of Chaos. It’s the only thing the Soul-Executing Blade can’t cut through. Nothing will work but to cut my arm off. Do it quickly!”

Zhao Yunlan ignored him and carefully sheathed the blade. Then he got out a paper talisman of the Soul-Guarding Order. With a snap of his fingers, a small spark burst forth, and he sent the blazing talisman shooting straight into the mist…

…And the talisman disappeared. Not a speck remained.

“Cut off my arm!” Shen Wei yelled.

Zhao Yunlan acted like he didn’t hear him. Next, he took out the true Soul-Guarding Order, carved from the Great Divine Tree itself, which he had brought along specially.

Alarmed, Shen Wei said, “You can’t—”

But before Shen Wei could finish speaking, Zhao Yunlan proved that actions were faster than words. The Soul-Guarding Order, made from the wood of the Great Divine Tree, began to burn. The flame rose a third of a meter into the air, burning an unnatural red. The black mist ensnaring Shen Wei’s arm finally shrank back in fear.

Regaining the use of his arm, the first thing Shen Wei did was grab the burning Soul-Guarding Order. Still holding Zhao Yunlan close, he dodged around the swamp-like mist. A pool of clear spring water welled up in his palm, extinguishing the fire on the Soul-Guarding Order, but half of the words were already burned off. Only the right half of the characters were still legible. The words on the back—“Guard the souls of the living, bring peace to the hearts of the dead”—were entirely gone.



3) Ghost Face kidnaps Shen Wei

Squeezing the words out from between his teeth, Zhao Yunlan said, “Let. Go. Of. Him.”

“Him? He and I were born as twin Kings of the Gui. You know, even though circumstances left us so incompatible, I still had no desire to hurt him. He was the one who drove me to it, every step of the way.” Pausing between each word, Ghost Face continued. “If you want him, fine. Bring me the Soul-Guarding Lamp in exchange.”

Who the fuck even knew what a Soul-Guarding Lamp was?

Zhao Yunlan’s handsome face clouded over. “If you were smart, you’d jam an icicle in my chest too. Otherwise, I’ll make sure you never have a moment’s peace for all eternity.”

Through broken peals of laughter, Ghost Face replied, “If you were Kunlun-jun, I’d gladly die here today if it meant ending your existence, but…”

He quivered once, violently, and the Soul-Guarding Whip, which no longer had the Great Divine Tree’s protection, shattered into innumerable fragments. The force of it cut Zhao Yunlan’s palm open to the bone. “My dear Guardian, you truly have nothing to fear from me.” Ghost Face sighed. “I’m grateful for your soul fire, and thanks to his influence, I can’t help but…like you a little. There’s no harm in letting you live.”

There came another sharp laugh. Black mist filled the air, and just like that, both Ghost Face and the cocooned Shen Wei were gone.



4) Lin Jing talks to the youchu

With a gulp, Lin Jing forced a sad attempt at a smile. “U-um, I only just got here. I didn’t know we had a rule against reciting scriptures. K-kindly forgive me. I’ll correct my ways at once.”

The youchu nearest to Lin Jing greedily came even closer. It raised its nose and sniffed hungrily at his scent of fresh flesh and blood.

Lin Jing was about to cry. “I haven’t bathed in three days! Comrade, be mindful of your manners!”

The youchu’s mouth gaped open, preparing to bite—only for a more humanlike youchu to suddenly grab the back of that one’s neck, reacting to the gall of it daring to claim food for itself. This higher-ranked youchu twisted its fingers, separating the inferior youchu’s head from its body. The head hung there, dangling like a grotesquely shaped wind chime.

The one that had casually killed its own kin tore an ear from the corpse and gobbled it up without even a splash of soy sauce or vinegar. Then it generously threw the corpse a short distance away. The corpse was immediately swarmed by youchu, which descended on it as if it were a holiday feast. Less than half a minute later, barely even a scrap remained of the dead youchu’s skin or bones.

Gawking, Lin Jing murmured, “My Buddha is merciful. Please reflect on your table manners, benefactors.”



5) Shen Wei mocks Ghost Face

Even nailed to the Ancient Merit Tree, Shen Wei still laughed at him. The laugh was weak but mocking. “What, has your scheme with the Four Hallowed Artifacts failed already? What happened to the Reincarnation Dial? Did it turn into an ordinary rock in your hands?”

Ghost Face’s eyelid twitched violently. He slapped Shen Wei across the face, and his brother’s head snapped to the side with the force of it. The blow broke the skin inside his mouth on his gritted teeth.

Shen Wei spat the blood out, then said, “The Reincarnation Dial was made from the Three-Life Rock, and the Three-Life Rock and the Ancient Merit Tree are each connected to one of every person’s seven corporeal souls. They are connected through the souls of the living. Only the Mountain-River Awl contains both yin and yang within itself as one.

“The Awl can trap anything in the world. I lured you out with it and put a tracking spell on you. Then, exactly as I expected, you brought out the Soul-Tempering Cauldron, and then the Merit Brush, where everyone could see. The most important hearthstone under the Soul-Tempering Cauldron is from the Three-Life Rock. As for where you found such a fragment…I don’t even need to guess. The moment the Merit Brush appeared in the world, I found the Reincarnation Dial and put it in the Mountain-River Awl. How do you suppose that cauldron ended up in your hands so easily? Did you really think yourself so lucky that someone would just give you a pillow the moment you felt sleepy?”

“Mountain-River Awl… The Mountain-River Awl was in your hands all along? You were the one who planned for it to appear in Q ingxi Village?”

“Can’t you read? ‘Mountain-River.’ ‘Mountain-River.’ The thirty-six mountains begin with Kunlun Mountain. I inherited the Mountain God’s power and an inherent connection to the ten thousand great mountains. Why would I fight you for something…that has always been in my hands?” Cold sweat dripped into Shen Wei’s mouth. Unbothered, he licked his lips. “One more thing you might want to know. Remember the bait you used to lure me here? That wisp of Chaos you took from your own body? Where do you suppose it is now, after I sucked it away?”



Questions:

Are you as surprised by Xiao Guo's bravery and competence as he is? What do you think about Zhao Yunlan's decision to sacrifice the Soul-Guarding Order? What's your favorite comic relief moment? Favorite angsty moment? Any thoughts about the many parallels between these chapters and their drama adaptation?

You can answer as many or as few questions as you like, or just comment without answering any of them at all! And if you see this post and you're not actually reading the novel, I would love to know what you think about any of this with limited context. :D

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[personal profile] autodach 2025-07-05 07:15 pm (UTC)(link)
This is honestly pure bravery - feeling like this and doing the the scary thing anyway, all on his own.

Right?? Go, Xiao-Guo!

Shen Wei seems to always use light when he does any kind of supernatural thing.

Ooh, I didn't even notice!

This is dramatic and all, but also I love how much attention is drawn to Zhao Yunlan's eyelashes in the novel.

Isn't he said to have double lidded eyes, too? A lot of detail and attention for his eyes in the novel ♥️

So Shen Wei is outside the dome?

Is he??? I didn't picture the scene this way either... Maybe Lin Jing is just rushing to the other side of the dome they're both under?

This quote has always been so weird to me

I wouldn't take "ugly" literally here. It could just mean he's obviously not the real Shen Wei, or not quite as beautiful.
The Dollar Store version of Professor Shen XD
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[personal profile] china_shop 2025-07-06 02:10 am (UTC)(link)

Is he??? I didn't picture the scene this way either... Maybe Lin Jing is just rushing to the other side of the dome they're both under?

The start of chapter 19 makes it clear Shen Wei is outside the dome, I think. (The illustration in ch 18, while pretty, doesn't help much in terms of what's going on with the water/dome situation. ;-p)

I wouldn't take "ugly" literally here. It could just mean he's obviously not the real Shen Wei, or not quite as beautiful.

Yes, agreed. I think Lin Jing is seeing expression and "inner beauty" as much as skin-deep beauty.

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[personal profile] china_shop 2025-07-06 02:29 am (UTC)(link)

Hah, another person falling against GCC's car (after the 'evil' half-yao) - no wonder the drama had a scene like that too. :D

Oh, true! It's the inspiration for Bai Suxia. Great catch!

Aw, I adore her, a kid just like GCC (and seemingly with a similar personality), unable to do the right thing no matter how much she wants to.

Yes! So conscientious. *hearts*

and also wouldn't he get hurt by it if it's in his pocket, and especially if he holds it the wrong way while trying to keep it in check?

Ooh, great question. I have no idea. (If that was the case, would he carry it in his pocket, given how nervous he is?)

So the process of whatever-happened-there was gradual? Or were the people at the resort imprisoned before everyone got incinerated (including the people who arrived later)?

Great point! It couldn't have just been a single event, could it? /o\

Hah, so they both do that - just a moment ago (last chapter) it was Zhao Yunlan who didn't speak fast enough to stop Shen Wei from following a terrible idea. :P

True! But I feel like both times it's framed at ZYL being right and SW being wrong -- don't you think? ZYL is taking drastic action, but even here, SW seems driven by anger/revulsion. ... Oh no, I just realised: his hand is REALLY DIRTY right now, and he's all "JUST CUT IT OFF!!!!" /o\ /o\ /o\

So the Guardian's duties were part of Shen Wei's promise to Shennong?

I thought this was part of the metaphysical laws, rather than something Shennong was imposing? It feels to me like Shennong had to do some hacking and workarounds to shoehorn Kunlun into the Reincarnation Cycle, and the SGO was part of that.

Shen Wei seems to always use light when he does any kind of supernatural thing.

Ooh, that's a great point. I wonder if that's why they had the plant-healing a few chapters ago -- because otherwise I might just read this as fighting Chaos with light, rather than SW's actual MO.

Also nice foreshadowing with Shen Wei saying that cutting his heart out is not going to kill him!

Oh, yes! True!! :D (And now I'm wondering about drama!SW, who survives a chest icicle for much longer than a human would.)

With this much intro about how swift and powerful the whip is, it sure doesn't sound like a fun thing to have around your neck!

Great point! It's so powerful!!

I know the Lantern/Lamp thing is not even there yet, but this unrelated sentence reads so much like bringing light to Dixing!

Oooh, it really does! *hearts* :D

An earlier description said that the water stops once you go down to the Seal, but now there is actually a dome? Maybe the water only stops for people who are supernaturally protected (the Emissary, Zhao Yunlan with the pearl/scale) and normal mortals wouldn't survive there without a dome?

See my other comment. I think if it was just the same waters as above, it wouldn't be cascading??

And yay, the entire drama sequence with Lin Jing suddenly having a dying Shen Wei thrown at him, while both of them are imprisoned by Shen Wei's brother. :D

Yess!! :D

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[personal profile] trobadora 2025-07-06 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
But I feel like both times it's framed at ZYL being right and SW being wrong -- don't you think?

I didn't feel ZYL was framed as right exactly, but the narrative definitely didn't judge him the way it did SW!

Oh no, I just realised: his hand is REALLY DIRTY right now, and he's all "JUST CUT IT OFF!!!!" /o\ /o\ /o\

OH NO!!!!! OUCH!!!!! /o\

And now I'm wondering about drama!SW, who survives a chest icicle for much longer than a human would.

True ... I'd never really thought about that before! He has so many Dixing powers, and even as weakened as he is, maybe he still has just enough juice for one to keep him alive here.

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[personal profile] trobadora 2025-07-06 09:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Hah, another person falling against GCC's car (after the 'evil' half-yao) - no wonder the drama had a scene like that too. :D

Oh, good point, people almost getting run over by cars is a repeated thing in both! I hadn't even noticed.

Aw, I adore her, a kid just like GCC (and seemingly with a similar personality), unable to do the right thing no matter how much she wants to.

Yes, that was my thought too!

if he accepts that he's seen as someone in a position of power, then what the people see is that someone powerful is now going to take care of them, finally. And that does a lot more than trying to be modest.

Yes! Exactly! :D

So the process of whatever-happened-there was gradual? Or were the people at the resort imprisoned before everyone got incinerated (including the people who arrived later)?

Very good questions! I hadn't thought about them being imprisoned first as an option, but it could have started that way ... maybe we'll find out?

So the Guardian's duties were part of Shen Wei's promise to Shennong? I don't think Zhao Yunlan can know that if he wasn't told. :P

Idk if it's specifically to do with the promise, and yeah, that hasn't been explained! Also I have no idea how much ZYL knows about what him being the Guardian actually means - I for sure don't know at all!

I wonder if he realizes that this alone makes him a lot less dark than he thinks. :P

Oof, yeah, very good point!

Also nice foreshadowing with Shen Wei saying that cutting his heart out is not going to kill him!

Oh, that's a great catch, you're right! That comes together so well. :D

He has the power of IDGAF. ♡♡♡

LOL! :D

I know the Lantern/Lamp thing is not even there yet, but this unrelated sentence reads so much like bringing light to Dixing!

You're completely right, I wonder if that's where it comes from?

An earlier description said that the water stops once you go down to the Seal, but now there is actually a dome? Maybe the water only stops for people who are supernaturally protected (the Emissary, Zhao Yunlan with the pearl/scale) and normal mortals wouldn't survive there without a dome?

I'm very glad I'm not the only person confused by the water/not-water scenario! It hadn't occurred to me that it might have something to do with Lin Jing essentially being an ordinary mortal. Maybe that's it? I have no clue, LOL.

And yay, the entire drama sequence with Lin Jing suddenly having a dying Shen Wei thrown at him, while both of them are imprisoned by Shen Wei's brother. :D

Yes! It's amazing that they managed to make that happen in such a completely different way, while still the basic elements!

So Shen Wei is outside the dome? From Ling Jing's POV it sounds like there's only water outside the dome, but Shen Wei is presumably not submerged in water? I was so confused the first time I read these descriptions, and I still am, a re-read clarified nothing. :P

THANK YOU! It's so confusing ...

This quote has always been so weird to me because both of the Kings of the Gui are supposed to be incredibly beautiful.

I figured maybe some of what Ghost Face has done to break the seal has hurt him, so he looks unwell?

I genuinely don't understand most of the other explanations (especially the ones about the Soul-Tempering Cauldron)

Again, thank you! I'm always relieved when it's not just me unable to follow, LOL.

This is cool too, thought I don't remember what it results in, lol. (Also I'm assuming this is the equivalent of tricking Ye Zun with the dark/light energy thing?)

Ooh! I have no idea, but I'll be paying attention to this in case it comes up again!

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[personal profile] autodach 2025-07-05 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
In that instant, Guo Changcheng felt like he wasn’t fighting alone.

Guo Changcheng is so cool in these chapters. It's very realistic that he struggles to do things for himself, but has an easier time acting for others.
Love how the fire in him is both literal and metaphorical.

Ghost Face kidnaps Shen Wei

Icicle time! I didn't remember how passionately Zhao Yunlan is defending Shen Wei and threatening Gui Mian. Delicious!

Shen Wei mocks Ghost Face

Really fun that the my-plan-all-along Villain Monologue belongs to one of the protagonists :D
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[personal profile] china_shop 2025-07-06 02:07 am (UTC)(link)

Guo Changcheng is so cool in these chapters. It's very realistic that he struggles to do things for himself, but has an easier time acting for others.

Yes, realistic and so on-brand. I love that so much. :D :D :D

Really fun that the my-plan-all-along Villain Monologue belongs to one of the protagonists :D

Haha, so true! :D

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[personal profile] trobadora 2025-07-06 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Really fun that the my-plan-all-along Villain Monologue belongs to one of the protagonists :D

Ooh, that's a fantastic point, I love it! :D
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[personal profile] china_shop 2025-07-06 02:05 am (UTC)(link)

Yayay, what a great post! I love all your quote choices. :D :D :D

I think I answered most of your questions in my reactions... ;D

Guo Changcheng pulled the car over on the roadside, where he hemmed and hawed for a good, long while before finally gathering enough courage to follow the GPS into the nearest town.

Ha, a lot of people were finding GCC relateable in vol 1 when he showed up maybe 12 hours early rather than make a phone call. Here's where I really connect with him: decision paralysis. ;-p

I love that a) he unhesitatingly gives his car to random strangers in need, and b) manages to overcome his self-doubt to impose order on this chaos. <3 <3 <3

The whole crowd exploded into speech at once; the wall of noise was like five thousand ducks simultaneously yelling at the top of their lungs.

Hee! *hearts*

That was just how Guo Changcheng was. Whenever he wanted to ask others for help, he felt like a tremendously ignorant nuisance. Naturally, that made him afraid of whomever it was, and that grew into a fear of all communication, whether speaking aloud or even just making eye contact. But at a time like this, when he realized that the people in front of him required his help, his words always flowed far more smoothly.

I love him so much.

Wait, "Spring Harbor Resort" -- is there an actual harbour nearby? Or is it "harbor" as in "retreat"?

It's a really cute scene and I love seeing GCC rise to the occasion (and ZH's presence would not have made things better at all ;-p), but wow, all these frantically worried people telling stories of their missing loved ones really drives home the cost of Ghost Face's stunt. D: D: D: D: D:

Shen Wei, entangled in the black mist, was suffering from a renewed case of bullheadedness and flatly refusing to let go of Zhao Yunlan no matter what.

LOL! (Is there an equivalent to this in the drama? I can't think of one.) And ahh, ZYL using SW's blade -- it took me a moment to realise that he does that to break the pillar chains -- also in vain.

I find SW's insistence on having his arm chopped off and ZYL's "you're not a gecko" really funny, and I don't know if I'm meant to.

And then ZYL burns the Guardian Treaty the Soul-Guarding Order (instead of Ye Zun doing it). o.O That has got to have some consequences.

When it says "The black mist ensnaring Shen Wei's arm finally shrank back in fear." it really sounds like the chaos is sentient, huh.

Also, now I'm going wait, is (the spirit of) the Soul-Guarding Order actually made of the parts of Kunlun's soul that were "cleaned away" so he could enter the reincarnation cycle? Is that why the order belongs to ZYL and he belongs to it? I've forgotten everything, lol.

Expression dark, Shen Wei said, “Don’t you realize that you don’t actually belong in the Reincarnation Cycle? That your status as Guardian essentially grants you protection? This was carved from the Great Divine Tree’s bark, and you…you…”

Oof! But burning something so sacred and irreplaceable to save someone (and worrying about the consequences later) is so very ZYL. <3

Behind them, the black shadow kept giving chase. It was as thick as ink that was impossible to dilute, and wherever it passed, nothing remained. The shadow swallowed everything …almost as though it could swallow even emptiness itself. It was true Chaos.

And the gui are literally made of Chaos and Kunlun's soulfire, right? But the youchu don't seem to have any of these characteristics. We've seen them before in the Mortal Realm without any wider ill effects. *so confused*

Did SW diving into the crack in the ground get adapted into SW letting himself be swallowed by the energy seal in YOHE? And him levitating into the air happens in ep 12 when he's intimidating Tan Xiao in the park.

Oof, the icicle. :-(

The Magistrate was so filled with woe, he was on the verge of vomiting. Five hundred years earlier, when the Great Seal had first shown signs of weakening, the Netherworld had taken charge and gathered forces from all over to discuss the matter. Back then, a single call from the Netherworld had been enough to gather hundreds of immortals from all over, each one of them staunchly righteous. Every sentence they uttered was about “the people” and “the world,” so passionate were they about sacrificing everything for the Great Seal. But in the wake of the battle atop the peak of Kunlun Mountain, those people had disappeared en masse, as if by mutual agreement.

Aw, I have sympathy for the Magistrate here. "Politics used to be better." :-p

The Magistrate’s expression was complicated as his gaze landed on Zhao Yunlan. Cowards filled their ranks. Perhaps only those true primordial gods and demons from before Chaos had shattered could have hearts large enough to set aside their own lives for the greater good.

Clearly he has not yet met Guo Changcheng. ;-p (I love how, in the drama, the whole SID is filled with the spirit of sacrifice; I can't remember how much that's true in the rest of the novel.)

How dare this man, Zhao Yunlan, who was clearly no more than a silver-tongued mortal, not be terror-stricken or panicked?

Such indignation, hee!

Black smoke like spider silk suddenly flowed from the icicle buried in his chest, wrapping him within an enormous cocoon.

Did this become the pillar chains? (Oh no, wait, he gets tied up in the next chapter, at the Seal.)

Ghost Face blaming Shen Wei for GF's own actions -- so on-brand.

The force of it cut Zhao Yunlan’s palm open to the bone.

Oww! Srsly, OWWW. I feel like the next three chapters should be ZYL in surgery, having all his ligaments reattached. /o\

The description of Lin Jin's situation is so scary. (Is he, like, in a dome under a waterfall? The fact that the water is cascading suggests it's not a sea.) I love that his coping mechanism is to meditate his way through it and treat the youchu like anyone else. <3

The one that had casually killed its own kin tore an ear from the corpse and gobbled it up without even a splash of soy sauce or vinegar.

Yum? LOL.

And then Shen Wei arrives, and oh, okay, this is the pillar enchainment and the drama ending in one.

The Chaos Kings of the Gui had entered the world as twins, neither superior to the other. But only Shen Wei had received Kunlun-jun’s protection; he alone had attained divinity and now stood unaffected by the Great Seal…

Does that mean Ghost Face is affected? Maybe it's contorting his features.

Shen Wei laughing while held hostage made it into the drama, but here he's mocking Ghost Face and revealing even more machinations; in the drama, he's smiling at the strength and determination of the SID, iirc. <333

OMG THERE ARE TOO MANY MAGICAL ITEMS! I'm so confused. *gives up trying to follow things* ;-p

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[personal profile] china_shop 2025-07-06 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)

but actually he did a lot better on his own. He would have just let Zhu Hong speak without even considering that he could do it too, and I feel like she may not have the crowd management skills for this situation.

Yes, exactly! She wouldn't have listened and would instead have just tried to steamroller over everyone.

Indeed, but if he wants to destroy all life, what's a few hundred (?) people. :(

Is that what he wants? I think I missed that.

I think it's meant to be funny, or maybe it's just funny to me, I can't tell. xD *high five*

*high fives back* :D :D :D

Maybe/probably because this bit of Chaos is wielded by Ghost Face?

Do you think GF is frightened, though? I feel like he's be more likely to be annoyed, angry or sarcastic -- including about the lengths ZYL is prepared to go to to protect one solitary gui.

It may be because in the drama his grand plan is still in the future, while in the novel it was (mostly) in the past so he can openly reveal it.

I think drama!SW is also less gloaty and more stoically regretful that this has to happen. He doesn't have the self-loathing or the Ye Zun-loathing; he's just doing his duty, you know?

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[personal profile] trobadora 2025-07-06 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
but actually he did a lot better on his own. He would have just let Zhu Hong speak without even considering that he could do it too, and I feel like she may not have the crowd management skills for this situation.

Ooh, that's an excellent point! Not that it excuses Zhu Hong, LOL.

I am also so very confused about the alleged and actual effects of the gui (definitely the youchu and also Shen Wei and Ghost Face) on the living/all life/the world in general.

This, so much! *flails*
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[personal profile] trobadora 2025-07-06 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Wait, "Spring Harbor Resort" -- is there an actual harbour nearby? Or is it "harbor" as in "retreat"?

The dictionary says 湾 means "bay / gulf / to cast anchor / to moor (a boat)", but it's in the mountains, right? I assume there's no actual bay or gulf.

but wow, all these frantically worried people telling stories of their missing loved ones really drives home the cost of Ghost Face's stunt. D: D: D: D: D:

Yeah, good point! That scene does a very good job really showing that.

(Is there an equivalent to this in the drama? I can't think of one.)

I can't either.

And ahh, ZYL using SW's blade -- it took me a moment to realise that he does that to break the pillar chains -- also in vain.

OOOh, excellent catch!

And then ZYL burns the Guardian Treaty the Soul-Guarding Order (instead of Ye Zun doing it).

Yes! And in the drama it still does get burnt, even if under such completely different circumstances. (And also it's a completely different thing, LOL.)

Did SW diving into the crack in the ground get adapted into SW letting himself be swallowed by the energy seal in YOHE? And him levitating into the air happens in ep 12 when he's intimidating Tan Xiao in the park.

Good points both, I assume that's where those drama moments come from!

I love how, in the drama, the whole SID is filled with the spirit of sacrifice

Yes! I love that it's all of them, and that they're ordinary people (humans, Dixingren, Yashou) who are united by that. ♥ ♥ ♥

(Is he, like, in a dome under a waterfall? The fact that the water is cascading suggests it's not a sea.)

I understand exactly nothing about the water in that scene, and I'm so glad it's not just me!

And then Shen Wei arrives, and oh, okay, this is the pillar enchainment and the drama ending in one.

Yeah, it's so fascinating that they turned it into two different things in the drama!

Does that mean Ghost Face is affected? Maybe it's contorting his features.

Ooh, that could be! Great catch.

I'm so confused. *gives up trying to follow things* ;-p

*high fives*
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The dictionary says 湾 means "bay / gulf / to cast anchor / to moor (a boat)", but it's in the mountains, right? I assume there's no actual bay or gulf.

Maybe it's metaphorical? I have no idea.

(And also it's a completely different thing, LOL.)

LOL, true. And-- I was going to say that it's more about SW than ZYL, too, but actually it's the Treaty that confers Guardian status on ZYL in the drama, isn't it?

*high fives you back* <3

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Great choice of excerpts, and great questions!

Are you as surprised by Xiao Guo's bravery and competence as he is?

Not really; it's very him! But I'm relieved, because for years I kept hearing that Xiao-Guo is much more useless in the novel than he is in the drama, and this is very much not that!

What do you think about Zhao Yunlan's decision to sacrifice the Soul-Guarding Order?

I wish I understood the thing better, so I could better form an opinion whether it was a stupid risk or not. *g*

What's your favorite comic relief moment?

The youchu lacking soy sauce or vinegar for his ear snack. :D

Favorite angsty moment?

I know dramatic and terrible things are happening, but these chapters didn't feel very angsty to me.

Any thoughts about the many parallels between these chapters and their drama adaptation?

So many elements puzzled together in a whole new shape, as usual! *admires*

On to my notes:

Guo Changcheng pulled the car over on the roadside, where he hemmed and hawed for a good, long while before finally gathering enough courage to follow the GPS into the nearest town.

Aw! I feel you, Xiao-Guo.

No matter how reasonable she thought the crowd's requests were, she couldn't just go against regulations. She was overcome with frustration.

Aw! Comparing her with Xiao-Guo makes sense, she's a great mirror here. She wants to help! She just doesn't know how.

That was just how Guo Changcheng was. Whenever he wanted to ask others for help, he felt like a tremendously ignorant nuisance. Naturally, that made him afraid of whomever it was, and that grew into a fear of all communication, whether speaking aloud or even just making eye contact. But at a time like this, when he realized that the people in front of him required his help, his words always flowed far more smoothly.

♥ ♥ ♥

And then my dad and cousin disappeared too!

Ooh, so more than one incident? Or an active area that stayed active for some period of time, which these two strayed into?

Everybody who had a missing loved one was as anxious as a cat on a hot tin roof

I had to check the Chinese for this, and in the JJWXC version at least, it's 热锅上的蚂, ant on a hot pan (an established saying). :D

Guo Changcheng, however, stood frozen in place for a long while, unable to believe that he had actually done it.

♥ ♥ ♥

the blade's icy glint made his lips look scarily pale

Ha! The drama has plenty of Shen Wei with pale lips, but not for that reason. *g*

That's the power of Chaos. It's the only thing the Soul-Executing Blade can't cut through.

Ooh, fascinating! (Did we already know that?)

But before Shen Wei could finish speaking, Zhao Yunlan proved that actions were faster than words.

LOL, just like the other way round before! Though the narrative judges SW a lot more harshly than it does ZYL. *judges the narrative*

Only the right half of the characters were still legible.

The JJWXC version says more than that: 镇魂 (Soul-Guarding) is damaged, leaving 真鬼 (real/true ghost/gui). But in English that wouldn't make any sense, so no wonder the translation left it out.

A pool of clear spring water welled up in his palm, extinguishing the fire on the Soul-Guarding Order, but half of the words were already burned off. Only the right half of the characters were still legible. The words on the back-"Guard the souls of the living, bring peace to the hearts of the dead"-were entirely gone.

1) That's a very cool power for SW!

2) I feel like I should understand more of what damaging the Soul-Guarding Order (and more specifically damaging it in this way) means, and what kind of risk ZYL took here, but honestly I'm not even sure what exactly the thing does. Has that been clarified before? Can anyone remind me?

(The Order is what makes Kunlun's reincarnations "the Guardian", which presumably is what grants him his powers, but idk if there's more to it than that? SW's words make it sound like his reincarnation is tied up with it in some way, too. And also, it's very hard for me to tell which powers are actually Guardian-specific and which are just general competence with talismans and such ...)

Do you think you're a gecko?

LOL!

(Is this why the SID has an iguana? Pretty sure they can shed their tails too.)

Shen Wei suddenly leaped back out of the crack in the ground

Huh. Why did he jump into it in the first place?

Just as the shadow was about to touch the hem of his robes, a piercing white light erupted from the seal in Shen Wei's hands.

White light again!

The cold sweat gathering on Shen Wei's face finally dripped down his cheek.

That reminds me of the self-healing in episode 2!

Ghost Face, who had been lying in wait for some unknown amount of time, thrust an icicle over a meter long through Shen Wei's back-right into his heart.

Icicle time! (I'm glad they scaled this down for the drama, LOL.)

Cowards filled their ranks. Perhaps only those true primordial gods and demons from before Chaos had shattered could have hearts large enough to set aside their own lives for the greater good.

You know, I don't know exactly how we're supposed to judge the Magistrate's thoughts, but this really drew my attention to the fact that there aren't any ordinary people involved in all of this at all. Everyone has something that makes them special. I like that that's not the case in the drama!

"If the Soul-Guarding Order hadn't been damaged," Ghost Face rasped, voice hoarse and broken, "my neck might be missing a layer of skin right about now. Tsk , how unfortunate."

Good to see immediate consequences there!

Who the fuck even knew what a Soul-Guarding Lamp was?

I'm confused by this. It's not like this is the first time it's coming up ...

In my tribe, someone your age would still be nibbling their eggshells, you mortal brat!

Oh Zhu Hong!

Torrents of water seemed to be cascading all around him, but some sort of invisible dome surrounded him and protected him from drowning...at least for now.

Okay, that's definitely different from how it was described before, right? When ZYL went under water, the water just ... stopped somewhere, and then there was air. There wasn't a clear barrier, or anything about the waters being visible from the tree. Is that an inconsistency, or is it due to the seal breaking down, or ...?

He was also surrounded by youchu. The creatures pressed around him on every side, salivating.

But they're not touching him? Why? Are they outside the protective bubble, in the water? But then you couldn't see them salivating? *confused*

"I haven't bathed in three days! Comrade, be mindful of your manners!"

Oh Lin Jing! :D

(Also, that's what you get for being protected from the waters, LOL!)

The one that had casually killed its own kin tore an ear from the corpse and gobbled it up without even a splash of soy sauce or vinegar.

LOL! (Now I'm imagining the youchu pulling a bottle of soy sauce from its non-existent pocket ... :D)

Lin Jing rushed to the edge of the invisible dome.

???? Is SW outside the dome in the water? There's no mention of any water when he's being hurled down and stuck to the tree. And also there's sweat dripping from his forehead. I'm very confused about this entire scenario!

Even with his forehead dripping with cold sweat and constant tremors running through his body, Shen Wei was courteous. He gave Lin Jing a slight nod.

Awww!

But upon closer inspection, the now-unmasked "Shen-laoshi's" skin was slightly paler-abnormally pale, in fact. It was a white that bordered on blue, as though he had been soaked in formaldehyde. The skin tone was cold, somehow carrying resentment and yin energy. It made his face, which should have been so handsome, seem like a piece of skin draped over a skull.

Is he ill? Has Ghost Face done something to himself to look that way? Because he shouldn't be looking substantially different from SW, right?

"If I consume you, do you think I could break through the whole Seal?"

And here's the source of Ye Zun eating Shen Wei in the drama, I suppose!

Did you really think yourself so lucky that someone would just give you a pillow the moment you felt sleepy?

LOL!

I really like SW getting this speech about outwitting Ghost Face, but honestly, his actual plan goes straight over my head. Except that SW planted the Awl in Hanga territory?! I'm not sure how that hangs together. For those of you who've read the novel before, how did that change the Awl plot earlier in the novel?

I can simply bleed you out until you can no longer maintain this human form. Then I can pull Kunlun's tendon out of you

So, SW appearing human somehow makes the tendon inaccessible? But reverting to his true form (whatever exactly that means) would reveal it?

(I assume this is the source of the sporadic talk about SW's true form in the drama!)

Version comparison - There are probably more small differences, but these stood out to me:
  • Before Xiao-Guo speaks up, there's a bit in the JJWXC/fan translation version that's not in the official translation - the only bit that made it in was Xiao-Guo's oncoming headache:
    Another family member who came to report a case was a middle-aged man. He waved his hand: "Enough, even if she wanted to, she wouldn't be able to do it. Everybody stop pressuring her. Miss, let me tell you, my younger sister also should have gotten off from work yesterday but she never came home. She is about the same age as you; put yourself in her shoes. Think about it yourself, this young lady is usually very obedient, and then suddenly, for no reason, doesn't return home at night. We can't even get in contact with her. Don't you think of course we as family would be worried? If this happened to you, what would your parents and family think? I know that you also have difficulties. How about you help us go talk to your chief, ok? Help us communicate a bit..."

    When Guo Changcheng saw this scene, he immediately felt a headache coming on. On one hand, he gathered the courage for speaking in front of a big crowd, on the other he listened attentively to the people talking beside him. There were all sorts of things these people were saying, and their descriptions were a mess. Some others only knew how to indiscriminately blather on about "my xx didn't come home yesterday"-for those not in the know they would have thought that these people were purposefully gathered here to make trouble.

  • In the official translation, in addition to the speaker's little sister, "my dad and cousin" disappeared while searching. In the JJWXC/fan translation version, it's three people - "my dad, my eldest younger brother, and my sister's partner". Also, the line about the dad being 70 isn't in the fan translation.

  • Zhao Yunlan's reaction to SW asking him to cut off his arm in the official translation:
    Zhao Yunlan ignored him and carefully sheathed the blade. Then he got out a paper talisman of the Soul-Guarding Order.
    His reaction in the fan translation:
    Being a mortal, Zhao Yunlan could not understand this great God who could cut off his arms, legs, and head with ease, and so ignored him. He thrust the Soul Slaying Blade back into the scabbard, then retrieved a Guardian Order.

  • What Shen Wei says about the Soul-Guarding Order in the official translation:
    "Don't you realize that you don't actually belong in the Reincarnation Cycle? That your status as Guardian essentially grants you protection? This was carved from the Great Divine Tree's bark, and you...you..."
    What he says in the fan translation, with an additional sentence:
    "Do you know that you were originally not allowed to enter the wheel of reincarnation? That the identity of the Chief of the Guardian Order is equivalent to your protective talisman? This was carved from the Dashen Mu. At critical times, it wouldn't even have a problem protecting your life. You..."

  • About Shen Wei's inability to curse, in the official translation:
    Any time Shen Wei wanted to curse, his mind tended to go blank. He repeated the word "you" a few times but was unable to come up with anything better than a refined "You squandering fool!"
    In the fan translation:
    It turns out that even if his upright gentlemanly façade was mostly a pretense, this part of it was real: whenever Shen Wei scolded someone he was really bad at finding words. Ultimately, he had to settle with choosing the closest equivalent, and blurted: "You, you really are a good-for-nothing!"

  • In the fan translation, ZYL's reaction to Ghost Face demanding the Soul-Guarding Lamp doesn't have the line asking what a Soul-Guarding Lamp even is. Instead it says:
    Zhao Yunlan did not care to listen to this kind of "swapping hostages" condition.

  • In the confrontation with Zhu Hong, in the official translation ZYL doesn't say anything after she calls him a mortal brat. In the fan translation, there's this additional bit:
    He replied, so quietly his words were hardly audible: "There's no rush, soon I won't be."
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[personal profile] china_shop 2025-07-06 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)

But I'm relieved, because for years I kept hearing that Xiao-Guo is much more useless in the novel than he is in the drama, and this is very much not that!

Oh hey, this made me realise that his speech at the police station got turned into the livestream messages from the dead (unless that happens later in the novel). Cool!

I know dramatic and terrible things are happening, but these chapters didn't feel very angsty to me.

Yeah, me either. (I think my angstiest moment is the local talking about their missing relative. ;-p)

and in the JJWXC version at least, it's 热锅上的蚂, ant on a hot pan (an established saying). :D

Oh cool!

Though the narrative judges SW a lot more harshly than it does ZYL. *judges the narrative*

Ha, that's what I thought, too.

(Is this why the SID has an iguana? Pretty sure they can shed their tails too.)

Hahaha, could be. Iguana are a lot easier to film than geckos (which (in my limited experience) are always hiding). So is that another symbol of dying/being hurt and recovering?

but this really drew my attention to the fact that there aren't any ordinary people involved in all of this at all. Everyone has something that makes them special. I like that that's not the case in the drama!

Yes, this! I was actually talking to someone the other day about the difference between chosen-one stories where the person has hidden birthright verses "anyone can be a hero" stories. So interesting that the novel and drama are different in that regard.

I'm confused by this. It's not like this is the first time it's coming up ...

Right??? (But it does translate into the drama Lantern hunt, where they're a bit vague about what they're looking for. <3)

(Also, that's what you get for being protected from the waters, LOL!)

HEEE!

I really like SW getting this speech about outwitting Ghost Face, but honestly, his actual plan goes straight over my head. Except that SW planted the Awl in Hanga territory?! I'm not sure how that hangs together. For those of you who've read the novel before, how did that change the Awl plot earlier in the novel?

Such a good question!! *is equally confused*

"Do you know that you were originally not allowed to enter the wheel of reincarnation? That the identity of the Chief of the Guardian Order is equivalent to your protective talisman? This was carved from the Dashen Mu. At critical times, it wouldn't even have a problem protecting your life. You..."

Ooh, interesting!

Zhao Yunlan did not care to listen to this kind of "swapping hostages" condition.

This reminds me of Zhu Jiu's feigned attempt to swap his hostages (CSZ, GCC & YH) for the Hallows, and how ZYL and SW didn't trust him.

He replied, so quietly his words were hardly audible: "There's no rush, soon I won't be."

Ha! (I'm kind of glad they took that out, though.)

Thanks, as always, for the comparative analysis. <3

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Oh hey, this made me realise that his speech at the police station got turned into the livestream messages from the dead (unless that happens later in the novel). Cool!

I'm not really seeing the parallel there?

Hahaha, could be. Iguana are a lot easier to film than geckos (which (in my limited experience) are always hiding). So is that another symbol of dying/being hurt and recovering?

!!!!!!!! I think that has to be it - the symbol, I mean. I always wondered why the iguana was there, but if you look at it as part of that theme, it actually makes sense!

Yes, this! I was actually talking to someone the other day about the difference between chosen-one stories where the person has hidden birthright verses "anyone can be a hero" stories. So interesting that the novel and drama are different in that regard.

Yes, exactly! I much prefer the drama's version, so I'm glad they made that choice, but I do wonder about the reasons.

Such a good question!! *is equally confused*

*high fives*

This reminds me of Zhu Jiu's feigned attempt to swap his hostages (CSZ, GCC & YH) for the Hallows, and how ZYL and SW didn't trust him.

Ooh, good point! I think they must have got that idea from this moment!

(I'm kind of glad they took that out, though.)

Yeah, same here.

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[personal profile] trobadora 2025-07-07 12:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Now I'm wondering if this change in his behavior is more surprising for people who didn't watch the drama. He did have some brave moments earlier in the novel too, but not quite as many as in the drama.

Oh, that's a very good question! Maybe some of the people who talked about his uselessness in the novel hadn't finished it yet? The translation was in progress for a while ...

It does have some immediate consequences, but they are not that big, there has to be more to it?

Yeah, that's what I was thinking!

Since he only just learned the story of who he is, and it feels to me like this is a part of it that he still doesn't know. At least he knows what the Soul-Guarding Order does in general, but I don't think the readers do. :P

LOL, yes to all of that! That makes sense. *g*

It also gives him all the responsibilities, but it's not super clear what those are either?

Haha, right??? So much of this is so vague.

So maybe he's taking advantage of the distraction and he has a bit of space to fight back now.

Ooh, yes, I hadn't thought of that, but that makes a lot of sense, thank you!

You quoting this made me realize that his voice is hoarse and broken even though not much has happened to his neck (he protected it with his hand, and the whip isn't working properly either). This is adding to the theory that he is weakened/ill in some way, and his zombie-like appearance is a part of that.

Another excellent point! Yeah, unless the next chapters tell us differently I'm going to assume he's hurt/weakened/ill in some way now.

They are in the bubble with him, it will be explained later that they're forbidden to touch him.

Aha! Thank you, that was so confusing, LOL.

But this is the part I meant when I said that I want to do a very thorough re-read of the Hanga arc - to look for clues and foreshadwing re: this. :D And to figure out how SW's and GF's behavior was affected by orchestrating the events and being manipulated, respectively.

Yeah, I'd really love to know that too. I feel like this callback here is too brief and there should be more explanation of what exactly that means, LOL. But that's not priest's style.

but I feel like his true form is Chaos, and the tendon wouldn't be able to coexist with that?

But he (and all the gui) were born from the combination of Chaos with Kunlun's soulfire, right? And he was still that when he was given the tendon, so it can't be incompatible? Or am I forgetting something here?

>>>"I assume this is the source of the sporadic talk about SW's true form in the drama!"
When is that? Is it just an unconnected leftover, like the quote about the promise? Since he doesn't have any other form in the drama.


The main instance is in episode 13, when Zhu Jiu takes ZYL hostage (and ZYL fakes being hypnotised): "Lord Black-Cloaked Envoy, how long can you maintain your complete form on the surface?"

But it calls back to what Shen Wei says in episode 13, in the Hanga caves: "Chief Zhao, you know that on the surface, I can't personally track down people escaping Dixing. First, the burden of gravity is too great for me to stay for long. Second, I can use only half of my power here."

So the implication is that the "complete form" refers to his black energy system.

Oh, it's interesting to have some more understanding from the crowd for the police officer. (And it's also more realistic when there's less of it!)

Yes, entirely agreed! I think it's a good change.

Wow, he is really sure of some things in the original version. In the official translation it sounds like he's not even sure what he's doing or what it will result in, which rings more true.

Also I like it much better. *g*

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