It's not crowded at all! In fact, I appreciate you claiming the scene sandwiched between mine and trobadora's. Plus, it does help that the taxi, the evening apartment, and morning apartment scenes all have different things going on (musically, directionally, tonally, etc.) to help make our analyses unique!

I was originally worried if me taking the taxi scene meant that I also had to reference when they arrive at the apartment (and if I did that, would that affect how trobadora would write the morning after scene). But now that clearer lines have been drawn, I can be focused on my target. ^_^

I'm looking forward to your post about the taxi scene, which is just 😍.

Thank you! Hope I do it justice because of reasons that will be made clear when I finish it. 🤗